In case you're unfamiliar with the form, a haiku is a traditional Japanese poem with three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Haiku usually have have nature-related themes, but for this competition, the poems should be about Tomb Raider, Lara Croft or a related topic. They can be serious or humorous, but they must follow the traditional haiku format.
Need a few examples? Several years ago, we had a haiku free-for-all on the alt.games.tombraider Usenet newsgroup. Here are some of the poems that were posted:
Jungle gleams with rain Shadows hold hidden dangers Someone's lost MedPack –WombRaider What's behind that wall? Is it a raptor or snake? Maybe a cold beer. –Stiletto Dig the chick in green talking is not her long suit she says it with guns –Gordian Slash |
Those threads are still archived on Google Groups in case you want to take a look.
THE JUDGES: I'll be judging the contest along with three special guest writer-gamer-webmasters: Katie Fleming (Katie's Tomb Raider Site), Mary Goodden (Well-Rendered) and Jaden Morretti (Guns and Grapple).
THE RULES: This contest is open to entrants in the United States, Canada and the United Kingdom only. I'm really sorry about that, but due to regional restrictions, it's just too complicated for me to send online game codes to other countries.
To submit an entry, either post it in a comment below or email it to me. Be sure to indicate whether you'd like the PC, PS3 or Xbox 360 game should you win. If you post your poem here on the blog, please log in with your Google account first so I'll be able to reach you if you win. If you prefer to enter by email, I will post your poem here, but I promise to keep your contact info private.
Entries should be in English and should follow the 5-7-5 syllable pattern. Each entrant should only submit one haiku. If you submit an entry and later come up with something better, contact me about substituting the new entry.
The deadline for submissions is next Sunday, August 15, at 11:59 p.m. EDT (that's Monday 4 a.m. GMT). Winners will be notified by Tuesday, August 17. The judges' decisions are final. We'll try to be fair, but poetry is naturally a subjective thing. So please don't be offended if your entry is not chosen.
Thanks and good luck!
Haiku often juxtapose mother nature and human nature,
something Tomb Raider fans understand quite well.
Underworld concept art by Ben Shafer.
Inside volcano
ReplyDeleteEmerald ancient city
The lost Golden Tears
Grapple, tumble, shoot
ReplyDeleteStop the bad guys in their tracks
Save the world once more
Adventure now waits,
ReplyDeletepoised to greet a long-time friend
wielding two pistols.
(XBox 360 for me, if you choose mine; my laptop definitely wouldn't be up for it!)
Excellent entries so far. Thanks, everybody. (To those who've posted and retracted entries, I've deleted the ones you indicated. Feel free to try again.)
ReplyDeleteLoading The Pistol
ReplyDeleteShe Is Ready To Take Aim
Down Goes The Black Crow
Hunting for Scions
ReplyDeleteThrough jungles and undersea
Intrepid always
(I am not from neither USA, Canada nor UK, but I just wanna post my haiku, just for fun :D)
ReplyDeleteLost sites and ruins
Tombs, relics, Gods she will reach
Almighty mortal
Silent, shadowed tomb
ReplyDeleteLong dead voices calling out
Revealing secrets
a haiku challenge
ReplyDeletefor free guardian of light
i hope i can win
Magnums or Uzis?
ReplyDeleteWhere does she keep her ammo?
In her bra, of course!
PS3 please! I hope I win! ^_^
Here comes the T-Rex
ReplyDeleteQuick! I must use a MedPack
Well, so much for that.
This is totally off topic, but as I've been posting the entries people have sent in by email, I noticed how totally weird the Blogger captcha images are. Y'know those little text samples you have to retype so the web form can tell you're a real person? What the heck is "blensca," "flenit" or "eingradu"? They sound almost like real words. Is that Esperanto or something? ;P
ReplyDeleteShe hunts mysteries
ReplyDeleteThey echo calls to explore
Whispers...Come Lara
Lara's guns blazing
ReplyDeleteA few twists in the air, done
She's just amazing
I love the idea! Easy to do but creative... I'm from Germany and can't take part, but I'll post my idea anyway: ^^
ReplyDeleteMayan Warrior
Strong and Gorgeous Amazon
Guardian of Light
(for anyone who, like Stella is fascinated by Captchas: http://captchart.posterous.com/captchart#)
ReplyDeleteGreat haikus everyone! And nice to see some people posting simply for the love of poetry/Lara.
Indeed. Love all the entries. It's going to be hard to choose just three. (And thanks for the link, Mary. That's great! And my son now wants to make a T-shirt featuring our new hero, Responsibility Scallop.)
ReplyDeleteLara is the name,
ReplyDeletetreasure hunting is the game,
this is tomb raider
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ReplyDeleteOne month exclusive
ReplyDeleteMicrosoft causes much woe
Summer of Arcade
(360 version for me!)
Natla looking crushed
ReplyDeleteAdieu, Pierre, mon ami
Rex is full of lead
Pistol lock and load
ReplyDeleteAdrenaline surge and pump
Lara's deeds inspire
Dark ancient temples
ReplyDeleteHold mysterious secrets
That Lara will find
If theres more jungle you seek
ReplyDeleteFind the light and you will shreek,
Pray to the heavens they say and the light will accept as long as your heart is pure
(PC please :D )
Thanks for more great entries, everyone. :)
ReplyDeleteastronamer4598, yor poem does have a definite Tomb Raider feel but it's not a haiku so I'm afraid we can't consider it for the contest. If you'd like to try again, check the rules and examples. Haikus are typically 3 lines, the first having 5 syllables, the second 7, the third 5, for 17 syllables total. Sometimes they do rhyme but usually not. You're welcome to try again if you want to.
The flap of a bat,
ReplyDeletedrip drip of monsoon waters.
Ancient image stares.
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twitter @wicket2961
Lady, loving life
ReplyDeleteSeeks all answers she can find
Sometimes she finds them
She can be ruthless
ReplyDeleteDanger lurks at every turn
Speaks with her weapons
Pellets fling throughout
ReplyDeleteDeath will befall thereupon
All in an eye blink
Firing her guns
ReplyDeleteLara takes down the T-Rex
She takes the Scion
Ladies are polite
ReplyDeleteDebutantes do not raid tombs
F**k off I'm not Emma
I just noticed that last line has 6 syllables. Oops!
ReplyDeleteMaybe it should read;
Ladies are polite
Debutantes do not raid tombs
F**k! I'm not Emma
Take down T-rexes
ReplyDeleteTake down centaurs and mummies
and collect the scion
(PC please :D)
Lara And Totec
ReplyDeleteFighting Spiders And Monsters
Will Lara Survive?
She's got her two guns
ReplyDelete"Right. Let's go adventuring."
Under your control
Amazing entries evreyone
ReplyDeleteThis is my Haiku. Please add it to the entry list for an Xbox360 code. It captures the great lighting effects in Tomb Raider games, The deep and strange presence of a mirror and also the mentioning of her Mother.
ReplyDeleteFirst autumn morning:
the mirror I stare into
shows my Mother's face.
Decided to change my Haiku last minute...shouldn't get in the habit of procrastinating!
ReplyDeleteLara hunts lost loots,
In tanktop and muddied boots,
A tiger! She shoots.
Good luck everyone!
Thanks for the wonderful entries everyone. I and the other judges will be re-reading all the entries today and will announce the winners as soon as possible.
ReplyDeleteWhoops. This entry came in by email well before the deadline but I forgot to post it. Sorry.
ReplyDeletebecka:
A new adventure
Guarding the light together
Totec by her side